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What happened?

Something once stirred within my being
Overtaken by mundane obscurity
I've forgotten what it was
Darkness drapes a cloak of comfort about me
Shielding me from the world I learned to hate
Light no longer makes me smile...if it ever did
Loneliness now a welcome friend
Nothing hurts
Nothing hurts

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On Friday June 9th, 2006, An Expired Member (21) writes:

Nicely done but something... only dead fish don't move. SO keep your mind moving.

On Monday October 4th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

i have to say, i loved the repetition of the last lines. really hit the reader hard. im breathless. nicely done.

On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

very well-expressed; got me feeling the numbness completely. the cold echo repetition of the closure is very effective indeed. fine write.

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

Short but strongly powerful .. this caught very muchly my attention

On Friday June 18th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

wow, short but over-flowing with greatness, depth and meaning. wow. -MeL-

On Saturday April 24th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:

there is something so awesome about the words "mundane obscurity"...it's complex, and it made me think...cool write man...

On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Six-Out (1798) writes:

Agreed with capt. The feelings poured out through this. Simple, yes. But none the less good.

On Saturday April 17th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:

dig it ... a simple song .. felt the truth ... cool ... funguy

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