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Battered and Torn

Lying battered and torn on the floor
There's a knot on my head
A knife embeded in my thigh
blood streaming from my mouth and nose
Lying here I hope to die
all I ever wanted from you
Was Love
and this is what I got
*~Rocket~*

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On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

rocket? that was random.

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

i have felt your pain... this is way too real for me...excellent--jenn

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Exellent write..betrayal flows from it...be expecting it to go on my favorited as soon as I get upgrades... -fairy-

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, K_Love (686) writes:

Great write, I loved the images that you gave me through your words.. the last 2 lines are very powerful! Awesome write ~Kirsten~

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