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Scarred

My tears burnt your skin
Tiny crystal of scar
Forever imprinted
For the world to see
The pain
My heart left for you

Your words
Dripped like acid
On my heart
Trailing prints like glaciers
Inside of me
Telling me lies

Our dance is in our heads
A melody of mystery
Reinvented every second
In our hands
Molded like clay
Are the feelings we hid
*~Rachel~*

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On Saturday April 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

This is good. great use of metaphor. I loved how you said your tears were scarring and your words acidic. good job.

On Friday April 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (30) writes:

'A melody of mystery' absolutely exquisite! the dance of hidden feelings indeed, each step to the tune of our destruction. magnificent work, this.

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

"molded like clay" wow that line caught me and i almost died from sadness..i feel so lonely after reading your work ~slave

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Wow..like worm said, their is alot of emotion, and pain in this poem...-fairy-

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, worm (131) writes:

talk about emotions! I would be afraid to let someone affect me that much... beautiful!

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