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The end

If forever were to be cut short
Tomorrow would seize today
And tears would freeze as
They dropped liquid silver
Into the fires of despair
Cries would mangle in our throats
As we declared undying love.
*~Rachel~*

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On Monday July 12th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

This is very interesting. So much going on in so few words. So much to think about... Wonderful!

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

very pretty ~slave...

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

I liked this, short and to the point, but still leaves you wanted more..nice write. -fairy-

On Monday April 5th, 2004, Lynaes (1121) writes:

I loved the line "Cries would mangle in our throats". Very nice work I loved it. ~L

On Monday April 5th, 2004, nesbia (22) writes:

thank you so much Black roses for everyone

On Monday April 5th, 2004, K_Love (686) writes:

Wow, this brought me images to my head, I loved this.. its great. ~Kirsten~

On Monday April 5th, 2004, Zophiel (399) writes:

'If forever were to be cut short Tomorrow would seize today And tears would freeze ' - now that would be a way to describe the final day after

On Monday April 5th, 2004, Zophiel (399) writes:

pefect way that should read

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