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                   ...I see you...
                you are hovering above
                  or waiting below
                   I call to you
               ...Please set me free...
                  I am not myself
                  without you here
                  or are you there
                  ...I free you...
                 you flow within me
                 to torture my soul
                   cant you hear
                ...please free me...
               you give me the strength
                that is necessary now
                   or do you care
                 ...I need you...
                I am drained of love
                  filled with you
                is that what you want
                ...please need me...
               you have so many others
                 or are they lies too
             ...I want my pain to be over...
                  you can make it end
                Just allow me to be free
                   and let me die
                ...dont say its over...

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On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, Bluegirl (244) writes:

I love this. quite powerful.

On Friday October 15th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

This is despairing, but for what you went through, it's very well done. When I read this, it seems I'm removed from my body, the way you were when your rape happened.

On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

this was wrought with pain and desperation.. nicely done!

On Monday October 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_the despair rains over this piece...ultimate sorrow.

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