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The beast slowly shed tears of blood
Laying in the dark, defeated
No longer weak and powerless
I watch you fall to your knees
The dagger in your heart
Rage swelling into fury, I watch as you die.....

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On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:

This moment was captured greatly, It is if I am standing in front of this man, and twisting the dagger through his heart myself.

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, manywalks (949) writes:

Yep, what MM said, there is always more just laying beyongd the min's grasp; and this was very good, much enjoyed; thanks. ~ wen

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Hey, fairy! A poem is NEVER done... This is still good. Hold your head high. Carry on.

On Saturday August 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

I think it is good how it is,.... great write

On Sunday August 1st, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

very nice work! really dug this piece* 669*

On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Its not done yet

On Sunday July 25th, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:

It's a nice poem, and I love your work. But I honestly think it moves to fast.

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

i love the way you fell as if you your standin infront this terriable man watchin him die and at the same time geting this feelin of relief as he slowly dies love it. simple and to the point. perfect. ~darlin :)

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