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Lost Innocence

I wrote this almost two years ago, I still dont know why
I keep it posted. It was written about someone I once loved..

Growing hate inside myself
Growing hate for you
Pain ripping my soul away
if only you knew...

A secret locked away
Stored in A broken heart
Has finally been set free
but I still feel torn apart

My innocence was ripped away
on A cold October morning
I remember your sweaty hands
exploring were they shouldn’t have
As the intensity was rising

The pain of you inside of me
A frightful kind of ecstasy
and as my childhood bled away
I was yours and I had to stay..

To afraid to tell...because, I loved you still...

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On Monday October 30th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:

we'll always love the very one that hurts us the most................beautiful

On Friday September 15th, 2006, Reverend Machine (91) writes:

Your word choice is elegant and beautiful, to having put something this tradgic and sorrowful into words. I feel the pain that burns in this. Loving one so much that you dare only to cope in the chance they will still cast an affectionate glance.

On Friday September 15th, 2006, Reverend Machine (91) writes:

Yours when needed. -Rev

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, LordBrosnian (65) writes:

Such a flower fallen to such caddish masquerades, learn to grow above such lulling pain, entrancing simple men like me to breath such acrid fumes...emmited from the stamens of your savaged poetry!

On Friday June 17th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

i'm sorry this happened. not many people could write about that, and make it bautiful.

On Tuesday April 5th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

Wow. Im sorry that this happened to you. But know that who ever did this, sooner or later it will catch up to them and they will suffer for the pain they have caused you. ~Unlucky

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

This was hard to handle, but you handled it well. ~Shane~

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

this is going to be my first favorite.. i don't know if that means anything to you.

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

my e-mail is on my profile lookin foward to talkin to you. ~darlin

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

this is the worst thing that could happen to anyone and im extremly sorry it had to be you..its hard to write it out and some how you did and with that broke many people's heart. just wanted to let you know you can dp-mail me or mail me anytime(my e-mails

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

wow sorry it took me so long to read. this was great. and I'm sorry that it had to happen to you.

On Monday May 31st, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

poor babe, *offers hugs*

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

this really demonstrates how someone who goes through this can have mixed emotions about it...powerfully conveyed..very good

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Instant Insanity (754) writes:

:-( I can do is sit and stare

On Monday May 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

gave me a poignant feeling after reading this. grippingly sad. very nice write on this. :)

On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Heart of Stone (32) writes:

Wow! This is brutal yet striking. The way you make it flow is beautiful. The truth in the poem is painful. You can feel it. Awesome.

On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:

I love this-- So much that I can feel your pain.. Your words pierced me like a shard of glass gouging all the way through my body.. ºLucifielº

On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Yeah, I think he should die to..-fairy-

On Monday April 26th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

whom ever tha person was should die. nice write.~~~Grave

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

this dug a hole in me a deep one. . . i hope your okay. . .~ss

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, K_Love (691) writes:

Painfully beautiful, I haven't heard a rape poem quite like this, originality flowed through this. Awesome write. ~Kirsten~

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:

beautiful...such harsh beauty...so sorrow and filled with pain...amazing

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