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Shadows

Shadows on my soul
Shadows fleeing through my mind
Shadows creeping, weeping,
through everything they find
Sunshine breaks through slowly
it does not last for long
for sunshine causes shadows
and shadows steal my song.
My life has been a shadow,
just a shadow of what could be
For my soul is just a Shadow
of the person, that is me.

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On Friday July 11th, 2008, An Expired Member (7) writes:

so deeply X]

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, LordBrosnian (63) writes:

Very nice I enjoyed it...identity once listless, languid now emblazons pride...For shade, the purest of the hues allows lame wings to fly...so fly

On Friday November 18th, 2005, LovesInjecedVirus (10) writes:

amazing.. i really like it..it shows what my souls yearning for...

On Thursday January 6th, 2005, Lydia Jade (784) writes:

its got al the dark eerie prospcts of true dark poetry

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Thankyou=), and i will keep writing..

On Saturday September 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i can really relate to this.. which is great. so.. keep writing..please? =) -EnDlEsS*

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

This is the best. Thank you. Some of us lurk in shadows, then we run & hide. Some of us live in shadows. The light & dark remain inside. God bless you. ~Shane~

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

i felt the full circle in this .. deep & very true .. loved it! *669*

On Saturday July 17th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

seems you are in a catch 22, you don't want to be a shadow of yourself, but the shadow is you? I like your word-play here, very nice write.

On Monday May 31st, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

i feel like a shadow in a room of many, and mostly ignored, well done

On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, nesbia (22) writes:

i love it, we all have shadows

On Tuesday April 27th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Thats very true..

On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

The closer you walk towards the light..the bigger your shadow gets..-Kefkism

On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:

i liked this one alot it is more complex then it seems yet it protrays a huanting sorrow.....nicely written....::LoKi::

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, steuss (141) writes:

I like this, simple, yet complex, i feel that i can relate. Thanks.

On Friday April 9th, 2004, Instant Insanity (735) writes:

Agreed, This is So Simple But different, Once again I have to say you have a great use of words,

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_simply awesome...what a liquid,dancing flow...i love it..."My life has been a shadow, just a shadow of what could be" really stood out for me.-tim

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, PerfectAdvocate (25) writes:

This is a nice piece. Very well done.

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, nell (328) writes:

i like this, it's short, rhymes and is a nice little piece, good job;)

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