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Distopia

my bloodshot eyes of blue burning sun
lead me of this path i travel on
hums and hiss radiate through
echoing a voice of life without you

skies bright orange, clouds of green
gold glitters the land in chaotic sheen
stars reflect in disconcerting agony
the moon falls in praising blashpemy

the road too rugged and steep to climb
pictures flash of my past life
some portray as happy, most filled with sorrow
predicting the life that will lead me tomorrow

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On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, Circe Avalon (186) writes:

I love the use of color you used to paint this dark feeling in you work.

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

gAH~dAMN...I love this...Short and sweet!!! -_OttOEviL_-

On Saturday March 18th, 2006, heartdripsblack (765) writes:

i loved it great work

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (889) writes:

Syn i love ya baby doll so please try to understand when i say this is drivel. Might as well stick a WWJD sticker on your forhead and tell ppl that god thinks for you when good stuff happens and blame yourself when the bad comes behind it.

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (889) writes:

your past has nothing to do with your future if you don't allow it to. Something only has as much power over you as you give it. Same goes for ppl too.

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (889) writes:

hope i didn't hurt your feelings i truely said this out of love

On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, Lifeless (59) writes:

I think this is incredible. Very creative. Great talent.

On Tuesday May 3rd, 2005, Astra Dei (645) writes:

very cool imagery. well done

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