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An Ode To Myself...about myself.

once you die
you no longer bleed
and crimson drains
out from your dreams

the scratches fade
leaving scars
the bruises turn
into who you are

the trek is done
and you realize that
nothing matters
but what youve had

its too late now
to turn around
as silent screams
drift from your mouth

its too late now
to say goodbye
as you wipe dry
tears from your eyes

its too late now
to close your eyes
as you pick up
the dirty knife

its too late now
to breathe the air
in hopes that I
will always be here

its too late now
to dream of life
and reckon with
abandoned lies

its too late now
its too late




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On Sunday April 16th, 2006, Ashlar (257) writes:
made me think of things i have missed...


On Friday February 11th, 2005, DarkWolf (447) writes:
"Every breathe leaves us one less to our last.." Dream Theater lyric.. your words were quite unnerving and stalking. The repetative "It's too late" brought that feeling home well.. -Michael


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (51) writes:
Very good write.. - Holly


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:
loud and clear...your words come alive on this one... great write


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Syn (82) writes:
Thank you :) -Syn


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, A Broken Soul (103) writes:
the format was a bit choppy in a sense, but the content was excellent! it reminds me exactly of how i feel, are you sure it wasn't an ode to me? lofl. ^Autumn^


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Syn (82) writes:
In the choppiness, I wanted to create somewhat of an uncomfortable feeling...Did it work?


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (51) writes:
Yes, it worked. I think you did a great job.


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Lydia Jade (788) writes:
lovely flow...interesting content ...great poem....tell yourself hi for me


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Syn (82) writes:
She says "hey...sup?"



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