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Im tangled in my torment
fresh breath is turning dormant
Im pushing your further
as I only long to be together

My brain is playing tricks
Im falling victim to my sickness
Only I can claim the blame
as I fight to stay the same

Im the only cause of my demise
I see it every single time
Im the reason that I fall
though I try to give my all

I wish you could understand
know this wasnt part of the plan
and sometimes my weakness consumes me
and breaks every single dream

If you help me now we'll make it through
its a lot of pressure to put on you
but tell me Im hallucinating
and that we are far from breaking

Tell me its all inside my head
and we're not dangling by a thread
tell me everythings alright
and that Im not losing you tonight



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On Friday February 11th, 2005, DarkWolf (447) writes:
This was great.. The last stanza, is so pleading.. very well done.. -Michael


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (332) writes:
the best part is always the ending :) wonderful write and beautifully expressed. well done


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:
Powerful comes to mind. Anything else i say, pales in comparison to this wonderful poem.


On Monday January 24th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:
Wow. I agree with S. Love. It was a magnificent write, and the last stanza brought it all to a wonderful close.


On Monday January 24th, 2005, K_Love (693) writes:
Beautiful write, the last stanza floored my and hit me hard. Wonderful job, great flow and well-written.



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