DarkPoetry -|- Syn -|- My Eyes (Lost of You)

They bleed for you
searching, scanning
wanting, needing...

My eyes are dry
of visions
mind mirrored
with your intentions
that bleed through
as I seek you

Anxious to see
endangered to be

Lost of you

**this was my first attempt at the blood. A better version to come soon?**

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On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, flying_fox (769) writes:

very dramatic pic...I love the glossy lips and porcelein looking skin too. I also like the minimal words, very effective.

On Sunday January 30th, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

woahthat is awsome

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:

very awesome

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

Excellent and wicked. The blood shot eyes are tormentingly beautiful.. the words even more so. -Michael

On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:

Wow, that was awesome. I know how that feels.

On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Lifeless (59) writes:

Wicked sick, Yo!

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