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youre on your knees
so eager to please
but give in to these
sanity pleas

your thoughts creep in
and then you begin
doubting within
all that youve been

quiet your mind
and let me inside
let all fleeting thoughts die
unto me do abide

trust my intentions
without apprehension
let go inhibitions
and stray from convention

hold out your hand
nevermind these bands
heed my demands
you'll be a better man



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On Wednesday December 15th, 2004, Silent Assassin (123) writes:
The flow of this poem was incredible. Very well done.


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
Wickedly done Syn. I feel this could be a great song.. love the design and the idea expressed. Very cool. -Michael


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:
I really like the flow of this. And the message, how it tells to trust you a lot, I hope they can. Good write



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