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Breathe

So close I feel
though I know we're worlds apart
if I could bridge this distance
Id lay my heart
to tie our souls
if only to be so pure again
lose myself in you again
if I could feel myself again
Id take strong hold
and never bid you go
Breathe into me
Resurrect me

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On Monday September 6th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

Lovely. Romantic, sad and beautiful. Nike is right, the last two lines are deeply seductive. Love this work. -Michael

On Monday September 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

I can relate. Though I wish there was more. Maybe it's better this way though... you long for more words yet resurrection itself symbolizes an ending with hope.

On Monday September 6th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:

beautiful--simply beautiful and heart wrenching perfection

On Monday September 6th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

lovely write; the conclusion is especially beautiful. :)

On Monday September 6th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:

simply powerful in its love!

On Monday September 6th, 2004, NikesRain (1503) writes:

absolutely beautiful and touching, so deeply. This radiates with pure intense heartfelt emotion. Great write.

On Monday September 6th, 2004, NikesRain (1503) writes:

and damn it those last two lines are seductive as hell

On Monday September 6th, 2004, Syn (82) writes:

:) Thank you -Syn

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