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Poison Lips

your poisoned lips
betray my tongue
sweet honeysuckle
painted blood red

beyond those lips
a tongue so sharp
laced of pain
and velvet verbs

but to be locked within that kiss
razor sharp between your teeth
to die within your lethal kiss
is resurrection pure

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On Wednesday January 19th, 2005, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

i really like this piece, and your name.

On Monday September 6th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (360) writes:

A dark masterpeice. Constucted beautifully. The last stanza is deadly effective...Yet both others are superb as well.. Overall this is a haven for worn eyes. Thank you. +T.P.U+

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

I love the first and second stanza. both were worded perfectly. Wonderfully rich in so few words.

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, Raven (377) writes:

"velvet verbs" just set the whole thing off into perfection... wonderfully short and sweet... _Raven

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

Good write. Love the last two lines. -Michael

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