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Demons

Backed into this corner
Demons feeding on my mind
slither 'round into my eyes
and climbing from behind

These demons torment with their words
and taint my precious soul
charismatic chants hypnotize
consuming my control

I give into these deadly beasts
spread eagled open wide
If not for their eternal life
To death I'd be a bride

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On Monday August 9th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

Well written - there is nothing like a good conflict between rival brain streams [good for evil] nicely done [D&A]

On Monday August 9th, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:

A couple of the lines sound forced, but I like how compact they are. "Spread eagled open wide" is a very good description of vulnerability, for example. Not bad at all. Keep writing.

On Monday August 9th, 2004, Zara Synn (76) writes:

"To death I'd be a bride" I love the way you put that.

On Monday August 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

i really liked this poem. it all flowed so well and every seemed to just "fit". excellent write

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