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you didnt stop me
and I couldnt stop you
two lives entwined in these dreadful hearts
in losing all our time

and i cry at the death
of anything we had
and i bleed at the thought
of me treating you so bad(ly)

what i wouldnt give to taste you
what i wouldnt give to breathe you
what i woulndt give to see you
yet i can only dream you

and this incoherence is killing me
your words in riddles
my thoughts in shame
can i please end this now?
please let me end the game




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On Friday August 13th, 2004, NikesRain (1504) writes:
all of it so heartbreakingly intense. The third section is outstanding. great write


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Lynaes (1133) writes:
Wow.. I can relate to this on an incredible level, every single line. I have to say this is my favourite of yours that I've read. Just, wow. Awesome work here. The emotion so fluent.


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
ver nice


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
"and i bleed at the thought" lovely wording, and all of stanza 3 is wonderfully sorrowful. -Michael


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, addicted_angel (28) writes:
very nice, addicted_angel


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:
wow... I like alot... good write! *JiNx*



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