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Please refer all comments to the depths below.
Her soul departed with just one blow.
The shot rang out but was not heard,
The only thing said, was a single word.
She spoke of "love" and so she died.
Please remember this broken girl tonight.

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On Saturday April 15th, 2006, Serenity (600) writes:

This makes me want to cry.

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, Ashlar (257) writes:

memories bring tears to my eyes...

On Wednesday March 29th, 2006, jestronlyrests (10) writes:

This is a really cool (and initially confusing) perspective on "what if" someone in your life were all of a sudden gone or dead. Take nothing for granted!

On Monday September 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Wow..... That's amazing. I feel like a friend just died...

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:

Incredible Grand Finale - how bout an encore?

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

Thats so deep and darkly beautiful, I feel like I have lost you and it makes me terribly sad...PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!! Keep it dark I love it that way. -Munkey-

On Sunday August 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

wow, that is really deep.

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

This one is so short, yet makes me so sad. I feel as if I have lost someone, and I don't even know you. Thank you for sharing your works with us. -Michael

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

The last line is the one that really gets me, "please remember this broken girl tonight". Haunting

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Lifeless (59) writes:

Wicked cool. I really ejoyed reading this.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Zophiel (350) writes:

I will remember the only way I have known you, thru your works. It has been wonderful to know you.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Rain In The Willows (858) writes:

awww, this was awesome, wordless, as tim said kya

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, anth (1612) writes:

impacting to say the least

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

amazing...

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

A pity, as I found this to appease me plenty, and in the most devious of ways. Time, place and person excluded ...

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

_wow...i have no words.

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