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A tear upon a whisper
a dream upon a touch
A movement with a glimpse
of what we love too much

Flightless among
the dampened ground
devoid of intention
muffled with sound

And life is made
of careless thoughts
And persecutes those
that have been brought

For treasures are found
within the soul
but buried within
the lies we mold

Stains seep through
and tarnish our mind
And no one can cherish
the meek and the kind

And when souls disenchant
and strain far apart
I'm reminded of how
I'm absent of heart






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On Saturday November 10th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:
It's works like this that make GOOD use of the rhyme pattern! Like a cycle that only breathes perfection when it comes full circle! Awesome!


On Saturday September 4th, 2004, Circe Avalon (180) writes:
I think I cried. Very touching, my heart truly broke and I mourn it's passing. Thank you


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Blyss Rayne (11) writes:
truth. plain, hollow (beautifully expressed, i may add) truth. wonderful work. XD -Taylor-


On Friday August 6th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
So empty.. so hollow.. Beautiful. -Michael


On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Zophiel (400) writes:
so very down, yet utterly hypnotic


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
I love this poem--the beginning completely entangled me and the flow and structure carry along your expression--very nicely done


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, NikesRain (1401) writes:
I love this...I got completely lost in it, with it's upfront truths told so eloquently. However, I know you must have a heart to write this beautifully and deeply. Wonderful work.



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