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you were my life

you were my everything
my breath...my life
you were my light
on a darkless night
you were my tears
that washed into the sea
you were my closure
on who I was to be
you were my heart
that you molded out of clay
you were my likeness
that melted all the hate
you were my dreams
that kept me alive
you were my sanity
you were my life

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On Friday August 6th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

Amazing. You captured this so well. Amazing. -Michael

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, MABUS (21) writes:

i love the emotion in this poem. great write

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, NikesRain (1475) writes:

..finishing this left me with a big sigh and a heavy heart. The perfect amount of words to convey a whole ton of meaning and emotion. Great write.

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