"within a circle of thought" by tears of decadence
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round an round an round they go
on this merry go ride round an round an round they go in an out with the tide round about the shadows play stand an watch them tall in the burial ground find peace then never shall you fall rise above look down below this is as high as it gets praise your god love him well an pray that youll never forget thinking thoughts of the insane sparkles in the sky red dots flashing sattellites clouds that weep an cry round an round an round they go on this merry go ride round an round an round they go in an out with the tide ... © 2006 tears of decadence
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On Thursday June 29th, 2006, K_Love (691) writes:
Beautiful, I agree with Cliche, I loved the repetition as well it added a sort of grace and a gentle flow to the poem. Wonderfully said.
On Thursday June 29th, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:
I loved the repetition. I think you used it well. This was beautiful dear.
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