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The Perfect Way to Die

Knives slicing through silky smooth skin
Piercing screams filled with agony and distress
Coughing up blood on a creamy white carpet
Evidence forever there

Slowly drowning in life's essential pool
Gasping for air that cannot be reached
Sudden calmness it will all be over soon...

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On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:

i dont kno what your problem is desturbing scream but everyone else seems to like my poetry

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Instant Insanity (754) writes:

yukk, Ive seen better writings from a fourth grader

On Monday May 24th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:

the imagery is astounding. i will definately read more. A_C

On Monday May 24th, 2004, K_Love (691) writes:

Ah.. Sounds sooo beautiful. Lovely images of bright red flowing all over white carpet. I loved every word. ~Kirsten~

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