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" Concupiscence" by gracefullytorn

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Your eyes shame the sun
Mine pale in comparison
Two holy beams that open up the sky
and shower the defeated with flowers
Buds of pure hope
Stems of strength
The glittering iris of distress
If ever there was a bright
Luminous to the highest extent
Your golden orbs would surpass it
I'm envious in my obsessing
Stifling my views because I'm lost in yours.




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On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
your endings are always intense...but so is everything leading up to it..excellent...*afraid*


On Saturday March 27th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
lovely piece... "glittering iris of distress" especially appeals to me. i'll echo season: welcome to dp. :)


On Monday March 29th, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:
yea i especially liked that line cuz an iris is a flower and a part of your eye


On Saturday March 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:
thats good! I love it!


On Saturday March 27th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_far out...this was such a beautiful piece...great choice of wording...welcome to dp.send in that post card.-tim



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