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Don't Tell Me

The night you whispered you loved me
I cried for endless hours wishing these words were true
The night you whispered you loved me
I whispered back the words I love you too
The night you whispered you loved me
I knew it was a lie
The night you whispered you loved me
I couldn't look into your eyes
The night you whispered you loved me
I took my last breath and said goodbye
I could not go on living this lie
I loved you.

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On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Daegonna (39) writes:

this is wonderfully written. and its so true alot of people say it and dont mean it and i loved the ending ~Daegonna~

On Saturday April 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

i really liked the repition it was really affective. as alanarchy said you have a way with words

On Saturday March 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

This one really got to me, especially then end. nice work.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Alanarchy (1629) writes:

This hurt. I love it when poetry leaves me feeling. You have a way with words that does just that. nice one.

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