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anxiety in slow motion by Anth
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anxiety in slow motion

~ Anth ~

Adrift of the streetlights inner circle
White round manic pieces
of suffering beauty
decorating shoulders
of those responsible.

The snow is as beautiful
as children with bi-polar.

© 2009 Anth
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, February 13, 2009, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:

    Beautiful, intoxicating confusion. Fantastic stuff :)

  • saintedmad On Thursday, February 12, 2009, saintedmad (1425) wrote:

    ..the unyileding power of your tone.....is imperative in these fleeting glimpses. .. . like a sudden awakening; an epiphany of words and nuances that gather themselves jsut for effect, only to be scattered by our own reading...i make no sense....lol....tis just the effervescence of you that settles in my soul after a read like this. something beautiful, something askew, soemthing slightly wounded. . .. egads.

  • whisperer On Thursday, February 12, 2009, whisperer (217) wrote:

    two-toned, beautiful and somewhat confusing

  • The Prophet Untold On Wednesday, February 11, 2009, The Prophet Untold (522) wrote:

    This left me that: "Did that just happen?..." feeling. Yet even after reading it a few times, it still leaves me with a bit of uncertainty. Nonetheless there is heart and mind in these short words. Wonderful, as is par for the course. +tpu+

  • snowdrop On Wednesday, February 11, 2009, snowdrop (2148) wrote:

    *nods*


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