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"fragile angel (with aegis)" by darkangelXlll

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as you sit there in your corner
so delicate
so fragile
your wings are slowly loosing their charm
and are rapidly deatching from your skin
so lovely

i wish i could just briefly
pass my hand through your hair
as it bows by the wind
like touching the most beautiful silk

your heart was as glass
...easily broken
your tears were sliding down your face
and vanished as they hit the floor
every single one of them carried their own story
their own pain
their own misery
you looked up and saw me
your eyes where yelling help
i ran to you to comfort you
but all i saw...
was your departure.



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On Monday April 7th, 2008, wilted (303) writes:
Strikingly vivid. It's a scene that is replaying over and over again in my head. The look in her eyes, saying so much, yet not saying anything. It's almost creepy how well i can visualize this.


On Saturday September 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:
beutiful


On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was wonderully written....


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:
Wow...amazing. Keep it dark. -Chance-


On Friday September 17th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
my thoughts exactly awesome write


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, NikesRain (1429) writes:
this read with such a quiet tenderness and sadness to it. The title fits it very well. Your talents blended together nicely. Lovely write


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:
you really capture a great mood in this,it was like a scene from a movie, much emotion and action,superb work


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Rachel (393) writes:
This is wonderful. The imagery is amazing. I could actually see this happening. I actually felt like it was happening to me. Great job here.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, Evil (549) writes:
this was beautiful. the descriptions were to die for. a few spelling errors (you might want to fix them)..overall it was gorgiously written.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:
:o:o:o:o:o:o:o ALRIGHT...i officially love this poem.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
poignant piece!


On Friday September 10th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:
i want to thank aegis again for helping me write this poem i really liked how everything fell one into the other thank you. O:)



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