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kill her

             ~ + ~Destroy her
                  tear her apart
            open her up and expose her heart
let her blood flood the room
let her suffering take over
let everyone and everything hear her breath
hear her gasp for air that isn’t there
   let her cry and her tears to be cherished
let her be broken
sacrifice her beauty and joy
let her die let her go ~ + ~

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On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

Why don't you tell us how you really feel lol. Nicely done :p ~Ship!

On Tuesday August 17th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

Love or hate...I can't tell which...you meld emtions so well it is hard to tell the differance sometimes. Simpley breath taking -Munkey-

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

i agree with munkey, nevertheless an outstanding write! ~sex~

On Thursday July 29th, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (138) writes:

there are so many ways to describe...love...you know them all!

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, sixsixnine (490) writes:

FUCKING SO MUCH TALENT ILOIVE YOUR SHIT! FUCVKING BEAUITOILPOBONHJCXB !*669*

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Intense..Great write. ..::Fairy::..

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Strong work.. So intense and passionate. I could deeply relate to the line "let her be broken".. That part particularly hit me hard. Awesome work, very dark.

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...sounds like some dreamt torture...kinda cool... -Stalker

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

Ok so it took me a few minutes to actually comment on this. I feel like I'm being wrenched from reality, there is an underlying sense of completion here. It's almost suffocating.

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, anth (1612) writes:

superb work, thier was a strange feeling of a claustraphobic scene of watching something and having no control,as if a modern day coliseum,anyways, its great to see you back and with such a great work

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