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freeze time....

you gave me a rose
you gave me hugs and kisses
you gave me a taste
of the sweetest temptation
you gave me hope
you gave me a reason to live

but once you left
you took it all with you
my hope
my wants
and my everything

you own me
and ill be forever yours

i desire you
i want you
i need you

what ever happened to
"baby i love you"

what ever happened
to all we had

it ended so quickly
it was like a fairytale
it was like a dream
i never wanted to wake from
but yet was forced back to reality
forced back to the misery
and pain of this life

i live in vain day by day
night by night
i always wish
you where by my side

that you come back to me
and that i could cuddle in your arms

i wish...

i wish i could freeze time
freeze time for you
freeze time for me my love.

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On Sunday April 17th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (766) writes:

amazing write. I love it ~*~tart~*~

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:

I really liked this one...it drew to a wonderful close. Sweet sincerity. =)

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

So close to my herat it hurts. great write, and keep them coming. Keep it dark. -Chance-

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

*heart

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:

fucking so much to relate to breaking thru feelings ! great write!

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

simple and straight to the point, flows well. Good work.

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:

left speechless by the poem. *thinks angel for writeing so well. I love it all, it touched me. Thank you for being so good.~Justin

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:

great poem angel. sad. i really like your writing, you make me cry too. ~toxic

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, gracefullytorn (70) writes:

whoa this is like three of my poems combined- great minds think alike good job

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, PerfectAdvocate (25) writes:

I love this. Great work I can feel your heart in this.

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

This was great. Just beautiful. Nice one. I really enjoyed this.

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:

Yhe last stanza tied this together. ~ mw

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

This was good. I have been there before, but only to get hurt some more. -Morb

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:

aw lovely write my friend.. and yay for the change in style.. though i do like bhoth ways, you're other way suits a lot of your work i think, good job!

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

oooh it's formatted... it's a pretty nice change, you have a good knack for both styles it seems.

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

nice write i enjoyed this thoroughly.the ending was superb.*thumbs up*fil

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

last lines summed it up well. i did enjoy this. and i agree with demon, the straightfowardness is a nice touch.

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

i really like this one... its so simple and straightforward, honest... very very nice piece of work.

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