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unloved child

weak wounded shattered and tarred apart powerless and repulsively miss treated lost and afraid full of remorse sad memories bad dreams and sleepless nights of horror captured by fantasies and graceful hands shoved and pushed to the side to be alone alone to sleep wake eat live and die pushed to the misery pushed to the pain that has been grounded and pierced so deep inside her soul she lost her will to fight back she lost her wishes dreams and most wanted desires this girl this poor angelic child that has been thrown to the corner and icealated from the world this tyke that has been fighting and fighting wars after wars till she got tiered till she finally gave up what's left for this foursome helpless child without a future without any hope will she be left out in the pouring rain standing all alone shivering of fear hunger and the cold misty wind wining harder and harder every time as she stands there getting colder and colder her life slowly begins to fade away wont anyone do anything about it wont anyone try to help her?

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On Saturday October 8th, 2005, Spyral (31) writes:

All I can say is moving. absolutly powerfull emotion, and feeling that it jus seems to rip out of the reader

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, evolve (2294) writes:

Your works are so incredibly powerful...they evoke so many emotions in your readers, as is evident by the comments you have already received...my only suggestion is to improve your titles a bit to draw the reader in... =)

On Thursday September 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

the way you put it makes ya wanna cry for the child and jump in and save it! i love tthe way ya word stuff! ~!~Shivers~!` amazing work

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

I would give my life for that unloved child, for every needs love and deserves it. -Chance-

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:

you work is wonderful *kisses angel's feet. I love it your highness. ~Justin

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

Very interesting..again...I love the way you let everything bleed together. -Morb

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

ok ok every-1 thank you tons for takin your time and reading my poem but i keep geting that there are words misspelled well thats because its ment to be like that. okidoki well thanks again. laterz.~darlin

On Monday March 29th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

ok i hate DS he has such a way with words well you know i got two words that are better "favorite's list" hehe i'm like this one a lot

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

wow... an experiance to read... this comes through as hard, cold and constant as the rain that pours down on this unloved child. it's like a landslide of all the pain she has been burdened with.

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

the lack of any punctuation or formatting actually helps it come through like it does... and i like it. i might add that there's quite a few spelling errors in ther.. but.. somehow that seems to add charm and character to the piece, - about a child. i'd l

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

leave them.. cus for some reason i love them there. overall a really powerful piece and quite interesting and fresh to read.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, PerfectAdvocate (25) writes:

hella good. i love this.

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:

aw, that left me feeling saadddd.. thanks a lot! hehe just kiddin, it is a sad poem though, and i do like it

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, Drea (930) writes:

i enjoyed how well you described her. The emotions you convey here are strong.

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, K_Love (688) writes:

I LOVE IT! Kirsten

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

nice...very very very nice

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:

there was a time when this poem couldve been about me(tho im a guy lol), but superb poem

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