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~till the hounds of hell~

slice slice cut cut right right left arms blood blood tears tears drip drop fall and crawl through the floor and through the ground till the hounds of hell the burning flames the burning walls of the home of hate the home of the evil crul and unwanted. death or life? happiness or sadness? good or bad? love or hate? does it all really matter in the end?

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On Thursday September 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

When it comes to does it matter in the end really depends on how ya view things! you put it in a good view tho-! i like it! keep writing~!~

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

Every rose has it's thorns but it makes it no less beautiful. So I would say in the end it really doesn't metter but we had an ok time while it was burning down wouldn't you. ;) Keep it dark. -Chance-

On Friday April 9th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

i love this so much... i keep reading it. i think this is a masterpiece personally. love it lots. fav.

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...all twisty and turny, but definitely there...I dig violence, and you delivered...nice... Darun

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:

*worships the ground darkangelXIII walks on. You I believe are better then most poets who's work I've read. I love it ~Justin

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, lollipoplips (110) writes:

*jaw ajar* wow!! i love this poem.the words, everything, man!!!(my fave part is hounds of hell the burning flames...

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

No, love and hate are the same thing, as Twi would put it. What much does it matter. Well done. -Morb

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...yep, we kill for love and hate...and quite the same way, I'd like to add...pain takes no sides... -Darun

On Monday March 29th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

the flow was insane, you are talented. i try to read it in one thought, which makes things more... organized. i'm likin' your style. you've got promise.

On Monday March 29th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

actually i have to disagree with clementine how many times have our very words been thought or spoken before and how many more time will they be spoken again i say ages upon ages my friend i really think you should spell check before you post however othe

On Monday March 29th, 2004, nightshade (78) writes:

rwise i think it is wonderful and it real pulls you forward into a whirling malestrom of pain felt by the writer great work

On Saturday March 27th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

wow, flaims is really spelled flames, though but still very impressive

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

Maybe the point of the poem is not to show cliches, but to actually SHOW emotion, I'm sure in your writing you have written things many have written over and over again, nothing is cliche anymore, rather, everything is cliche, it was a good poem, from a g

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

ood writter...^vTracerv^

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

Oh look, irony, I misspelled writer.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

does it matter in the end? yes if you cant spell, and write unintresting works....sorry if that was harsh, im not trying to come off as the best writer ever, or even a good one....just someone who thinks you could write better and not right cliche' shit.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

ooo how ironic, i mispelled Write ;)

On Friday March 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

I like that one! A LOT! Where'd you get the inspiration for that? Or did it just come to you like me writing about killing some one...ha ha ha...which I DIDN'T! Well...I still have several more to read...LoL Later~ MicHeLLe

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:

i agree with both demonslave n funguy! i totally loved this 1! but it would flow better with more of a formatt to it. great job as usual.

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, evolve (2246) writes:

Nice flow. Fantastic.

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:

nice write as usual... annd yes i'd have to say i agree with demon, i think you should try to format your poems a little, instead of making them ALL the same.. but still, good job

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

wow... you're good. i think i needa read more of yours. i'd still like to maybe see it formatted a bit, gives it more defined rythem and punch. still up to you of course. fantastic rhyming here, i see promise of greater things to come from you

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

heh .. heh ... cool stream ...action poetry ... dig the violence without tidy ending ... cool ... funguy

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