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my love

As i slowly feel your hands touch me shivers go through my body i fill with joy and happiness i fill with love and at that momment everything and everyone is forgotten then your lips end up upon mine for those flicking seconds i just forget anything you've ever done anything pulling me back from your arms i love you and want you more than anything in this whole wide world my one and only love...

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On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

Sweetly poignant...emotrion at it's happiest...good write... Kya

On Saturday September 18th, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:

The form used here, fail in the hands of many people. In my eyes you do not here. There could be a little playing with the ending of the lines while keeping them long still(the little break when read out loud)

On Saturday September 18th, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:

But that is realy how you read it; my eyes have trouple with the 3-4 line shift. The content of the poem is just fine, I loved following your track.

On Saturday September 18th, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:

In a way the exact opposite of the poem we both commented on. Leaving me to be a selective hypocrite. But arent we all? -Tiger-

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

Oh to feel this way about someone again I would kill myself and walk back out of Hell itself to prove my love for that person. Beautiful...painfully so. -Munkey-

On Monday July 26th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

i read this again, & realized how much pain we can put ourselves thru when we love without control* great piece by the way i really can relate & like it alot*

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

FUCK IT FEELS LIKE READING THE SPILL OF SOMEONe wHO DOESn'T CARE TO FEEL. SO BEAUTIFULLY UNREAL! *669*

On Sunday July 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

it hurts so much when the one we love can't help but hurting us...no matter how hard we try, our twist for right always turning to wrong, i like the dynamics in this once readin a bbit deeper

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Necromancer (85) writes:

i wish someone would love me that much. ::cries:: I love it. ~Justin

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I've been there but in the end nothing works out. Every thing you've or hes forgotton about that you or he did always comes back to bite you in the ass.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

again...another kick ass poem by you!

On Thursday March 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (11) writes:

these few lines are just amazingly simple yet so complicated. this i can really relate to. im sadened by this yet joyful. great as always

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Passionate and heartfelt. It makes me smile.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_awwww...how totally sweet.love can be such a good thing...it can also be a dog from hell...we won't talk of that now;)-tim

On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:

ya i agrees with everyone else, i like this, brings back memories of past feelings, simple but beautiful, and as always brilliantly expressed

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