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and when i looked in the mirror i saw that i had become a man
with little lines speaking of the sub-atomic particles swirling in the wirl-wind
that is
time
time laying small foundations

i wondered what kind of man i had become
just like i had wondered when i was young
a child and i found i had no answer
and decided that maybe a man is always becoming
=
running and the cessation of the act is not even worth mentioning
the attraction that there's more to learn internally
because i know there is no grass greener anywhere
there's simply more to being than developing opinions on different shades of color with your eyes cast down
=
after a cold shower
out of hot water
i find that the eyes of a child see only adventure
and the man i've become simply accepts
that every day you can't be tom sawyer

but the truth of my spirit tries to reconcile the two.



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On Friday December 1st, 2006, carlosjackal (1615) writes:
"but the truth of my spirit tries to reconcile the two." A fantastic last line to this introspection. I loved the hope it speaks of even when the truth of adulthood makes us hate this life and what it does to the free-spirit of innocence. Excellent write.


On Saturday February 25th, 2006, manywalks (953) writes:
Waxing the philosophical, and waht a gem we've pulled up. ~ wen


On Thursday January 19th, 2006, urbanhumility (1317) writes:
an interesting parallel .......made with words so eloquent...............well done............urban


On Friday January 6th, 2006, elisa (1980) writes:
beyond soul searching.........i can't remember the last time i've come across this kind of truth....



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