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i was walking through thick fog
to get a pack of cigarettes
rural living
and it felt a little like trying to get
into heaven
when everytime i came upon lights
the refractive properties of the water on the
air formed a halo a few steps in front of me
and i could see a shadow of myself inside
my shape but no face
and the way it played would have me thinking
that a few more steps would have me safely through
the carrot dangles
but my feet would not take me to the other side
the faster i went trying to get inside
the faster the light faded
until the fog swallowed it all and
heaven was just a distant memory



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On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Ainsof (1729) writes:
HOT DAMN! and not the drink! this is something to toast to!! mmmmm yessiree I think i was there! no, I did this! wow... what a perfect metaphor what a perfect experience... love ya!


On Friday February 18th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (115) writes:
Great visual quality to this, reminds me of the sort of thing you see when you squint at a street lamp for a long time.


On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, missanthropic (48) writes:
in the immortal words of the cure this work is "just like heaven" it really is so close to prefect in flow and imagery...


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, urbanhumility (1325) writes:
a self imposed managery......bringing insight.......well done jonas.........urban


On Sunday January 23rd, 2005, birdwell (181) writes:
i find myself in awe of the way you shape moments into art, it’s astonishing ~db~


On Friday January 21st, 2005, Liz (413) writes:
You're like the twilight zone.


On Thursday January 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
I like your work, and no im not from Sac, I live in England- But don't feel sorry for me. LOL


On Tuesday January 18th, 2005, MindRape (902) writes:
wow this is cool i like this p.o.v. a very enlightening perspective. Makes us all stop and think something or another I'm sure :) good write Jonas



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