i know this feeling but..in a different light obviously hehe... nice to see works from you hope there is more to come

i have been in this state many of times. your wording was beautiful and the longing that i felt from this was overwhelming. ~sex~

i thought this was very beautiful

ahh, quiet fantasies...so much less complicated than the full 3D experience... This is marvellously expressed; clear without overstatement, and...well, just right. I realise the banality of that last statement, and I'm sorry for my lack of clearer express

expression; you deserve a better comment for this excellent write. Outstanding.

yea...

such dreams we keep. alone. and knowing the tide, will forever ebb.. you never flow.

i agree with six, seems like there is more to say. but it is lovely. . and perhaps the length was intentional. . but it was a lot of greatness in such few words. . ;)

Sounds unfinished. Sometimes short is better, but this left me wanting more...unless that's what you were going for.

sweetness

i so hate you.