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i'm drunk on cheap wine
and i'm thinking
of you

and 'you' describes
some sort of comfortable feminine abstract
on who's breasts i can rest my head
and hear a gentle heartbeat
underneath the
skin
and
bone



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On Monday January 10th, 2005, MindRape (902) writes:
i know this feeling but..in a different light obviously hehe... nice to see works from you hope there is more to come


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, sexually_sadistic (502) writes:
i have been in this state many of times. your wording was beautiful and the longing that i felt from this was overwhelming. ~sex~


On Friday December 31st, 2004, frozen (756) writes:
i thought this was very beautiful


On Friday December 31st, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
ahh, quiet fantasies...so much less complicated than the full 3D experience... This is marvellously expressed; clear without overstatement, and...well, just right. I realise the banality of that last statement, and I'm sorry for my lack of clearer express


On Friday December 31st, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
expression; you deserve a better comment for this excellent write. Outstanding.


On Friday December 31st, 2004, tears of decadence (225) writes:
yea...


On Thursday December 30th, 2004, slow.burn.star (95) writes:
such dreams we keep. alone. and knowing the tide, will forever ebb.. you never flow.


On Thursday December 30th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (589) writes:
i agree with six, seems like there is more to say. but it is lovely. . and perhaps the length was intentional. . but it was a lot of greatness in such few words. . ;)


On Thursday December 30th, 2004, Six-Out (1831) writes:
Sounds unfinished. Sometimes short is better, but this left me wanting more...unless that's what you were going for.


On Thursday December 30th, 2004, AniDayz (1297) writes:
sweetness


On Thursday December 30th, 2004, Jonas (885) writes:
i so hate you.



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