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my youth walks blindly into devotion
caressing the soft skin of frail security
never knowing
or wanting to learn to let go

i whisper quietly on the streets
of familiarity
and i hold you close

west toward the setting sun

my future engages that which only god knows
as you hold me still
i never want to let you go
because i know we all follow
the sun to the west as it falls
over the brink of the horizon



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On Saturday November 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
this is so beautiful. "and i hold you close west toward the setting sun" something about this made me smile.


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
great write ~*~Tart~*~


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
reading this in a better mood, i have taken to it...lovely fluidity, and once again, my apologies for the other comment, i meant no harm. -zay


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
that is a helluva run on sentence...nice imagery, though.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
Ah, I almost stumbled right past this, and what a disappointment that would have been. This gently sliced its path through my mind for a softly rolling journey that ended all too soon. ~ wen


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
eloquent in its simplicity......beautiful with its content........well done my friend .......urban


On Thursday November 4th, 2004, Bast (896) writes:
this is beautiful. i know the feeling too well... in fact... i don't think i should've read this poem.


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
excellent meanderings; this read like a river trip somehow... Your work never disappoints. Gorgeous write.


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was absolutely lovely.. a breath of fresh air...loved the opening lines...


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:
The title of this drove its intricate lines deeply impacted inside. This is generally flawless, and it breathes in like air.


On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
"caressing the soft skin of frail security" that was a perfect line.. I love that especially. I had to read this a couple times, let it seep in.. it's like, acknowledging and embracing the unknown. Nice work I like it.



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