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i saw a small clear waterfall
pouring down over dark rocks
with little tufts of dark
green moss here and there

in the foregroud
set a little to the right
were the exposed roots of a conifer
shooting down
and out of the broken, loamy ground
to a spot about five feet
below the tree

and in between here and there
the roots trace this beautifully
random pattern
into the empty space

and the place felt so
serene
that i stopped and drank it in
for a moment

and i walked on

now i scrape the deep redish brown
curls of skin
off of manzanita trees
the little twists of
bark come off easily
just a little touch from one
of my fingers and it flies off
and down
floating to the ground

i slide my finger down a
smooth bough
and a hundred little red flakes
fly all around
and down

and i smile
a little bit

and i have never
felt
more alone



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On Thursday November 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
lovely; beautiful imagery in a thoughtful and quietly direct write... wonderful as always.


On Sunday October 10th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Beauty can be found in such simple places and ways...and the beauty like you describe, that I have only ever observed when alone, does at the same time for me seem to reveal


On Sunday October 10th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
loneliness...because it whispers to me that we are always, at the essence of our existence, alone... The same people I wish could be there to share


On Sunday October 10th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
the simple beauty with...would be the ones that would, in fact, prevent me from discovering it in the first place by their presence... I enjoyed this very much.


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:
this is an exraorfinary write full of a content emotion i sense....thanks for sharing...i truly enjoyed...****-knight


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:
extraordinary.....i meant...but you get the just of it


On Thursday October 7th, 2004, restitution jones (35) writes:
i envy this experience - jealous of the quality of your solitude . -res


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:
wow...you possess a great sorcery in your words my freind that let you convey them...STRAIGHT to imagry.....very very VERY well written..my hat goes off to you ~ME-UC~


On Thursday September 23rd, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
it seems that nature has brought you solace......often it is alone when we find solace.......a pillar of inner strenth.........well done my friend fish.........urban


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was really picturesque and serene.. but the depths of loneliness really cut through.. brilliant as always!


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Bast (899) writes:
you know... this doesn't seem, to me, like you're bothered by being alone. sometimes, nature is the best company. it always listens and never offers silly advice.


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Rachel (393) writes:
I feel you on this one, man. I really do. *sighs* Being alone is the toughest part. Then you get to that place where you think you'll always be alone...



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