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i feel invisible
and your eyes are like two
green crescent moons
dangling like apples
or ivy from the trellis of the stars
roseline!!!
christ! i can't hope to escape cliche in
this
escapade
temper tantrum
crying cryptic tirade

where do i place my head
how do i begin to learn to deny this yearning
to reconcile algebra and art
the mind and the heart
this
this is bullshit
i dance in the eyes of a painting on display
in the window
during a banal small town opening
out in the rain that more hangs
lurid on the air
and it sticks to your skin
it leaves you wet without the benefit of a downpour



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On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
what a great piece. you have an incredible way of really capturing the visual stimulation that is so essential in producing amazing poetry...GoLDeNLoTuS


On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
art


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:
love the imagery of the first verse. Really took to the whole thing in general. Your style is unique and appreciated. :::OLd


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
The visual in the first four lines is perfect. It is one of the most beautiful, tangible images I have ever had conjured in my mind.


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, purr_verse (1438) writes:
great in general, but i absolutely love the closing line. fabulous. purr


On Friday December 19th, 2003, Methos (154) writes:
"i dance in the eyes of a painting on display"..Amazing, i love your writing. -Methos


On Friday December 19th, 2003, urbanhumility (1343) writes:
a moving piece , to move you.....well done pescado....urban


On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Hi hun, I really like this work..It's very beautiful


On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
Your writing leaves me speachless everytime! I love your work.



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