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at a loss for words

pre-dawn relics

            wearethis

3am

in the words flowing in the gloam of angels robes hanging
in the air just over my bed
in the exstatic moans of everyday penetration
in chinese coin token worth something to no one but the owner as it is quite different from the everyday shake of his american pocket change

some days i'll masturbate
  three
     or
      four
times thinking what if i die tonite singing hymns while i'm pulling at it to make sure i'll be alright
allright

post war pieces

            blasted bits of alabaster

wearethis

santa doesn't stop
but flies faster over the third world

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On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

I'm speechless this was beyond amazing. Truly.

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

This was nicely insane... can I say that.. well I mean it.. good work. *reads it once again*

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Perhaps you are the bastard child of Mr. Cohen... Either way, there is something here that speaks of him. And that is as high a compliment as this existence allows me.

On Sunday November 16th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

I agree...being an avid Cohen fan...I can so deeply see his infulence (albeit hidden or not)..in this piece Fish...

On Sunday November 16th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

and indeed seeing as I havent been able to pen anything to honour leo..(he is that idolized to me) know it is prestigious to say the least, in loving this piece of yours...

On Friday November 28th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

fun thing is i've only ever read one cohen piece... otherwise i am ignorant to him. yay for the reality of my originiality. i am super special!

On Friday November 28th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

*shrugs shoulders* ... must stop drinking so much caffffeeeeeiiine

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

i mispellled 'allright' on porpose dont aks me why.

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:

cause you're some kind of mad genius. or just mad. :) i love this, i just... have nothing intelligent to say.

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:

No, I think it's because he's feening for some burritos...

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