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inertia

we change faces
and the places we've been
feel the bending
pressures of dialating iris and lost
acceptance of things that control has left
have been and gone
under

like monoxide tied blood
i've never in my life been doing
much more than staring at the sea
as the waves sud the salt of the earth

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On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_what could i possibly say to do this justice?incredibly deep and vivid...thought provoking as always,sir.

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

that first verse played on the fibres strung of my mind,a kind of distant yet familiar tune,the thought behind that verse,just mesmerising

On Friday October 10th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:

Wow...I agree, the imagery is complex like a finely aged wine...excellent.

On Thursday September 25th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

I had to read this about 10 times before I could comment on it. The last 4 lines just left me in awe of you. This poem has roots that extend into the very nature and fabric of our existence.

On Monday March 29th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

i completely agree. thought-provoking.. left me feeling so much. every poem of yours i feel the need of coming back to.

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