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b flat

awake!
like 5am
refreshed

i still
bear her tokens
even see her
on my sleeve

a raven flies
with the changes
in the wind

hangs high
on the western
wind

the same
lays the cypress
low

the flats again
as angels breath
and lighthouse
sings

for i am free like there never was a terrible dream
crescent wear crown monarch to the night with stars
in her hair
rose odour adorns the prayers of the raven kind
the curious and unimaginable
high god can hear the cry
will he will he
treat us as babylon our dreams unhinged and falling from
a new frame of mind

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On Friday July 18th, 2008, heroineyes (64) writes:

i love the way it reads...it's a wonderful piece

On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, carlosjackal (1653) writes:

Your best piece. Astounding stuff. -Carl

On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

I'm sorry, that comment was awful. I don't do well with this whole comment thing..

On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

and makes me flutter with the thought of finding it again. This is truly.. poetry, in the way I always wish to find it.

On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

*breathes deeply* i've admired this from afar for a long time. I adore the way that every time I come back to this there seems to be somethng i've forgotten.. so small piece of it that's somehow slipped away

On Friday March 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:

your works r just awesome!

On Wednesday January 21st, 2004, diavolessa (275) writes:

how exaclty have I missed this? This is one of your burried treasures I guess, because it is a treasure indeed. {dia}

On Monday August 18th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Shyt yeah, its like every one of your poems give off a diffrent piece of your mind..-Kefka

On Thursday April 10th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"rose odour adorns the prayers of the raven kind, the curious and unimaginable, high god can hear the cry," these lines sum up the entire piece; this is also one of the more creative lines I've read in some time... feels like morrison, blake... fish.

On Friday March 7th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

beautiful.... i sooo love the way you write... <3Dommi

On Friday February 28th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

so you found forever beyond the pain and actually smiled :)

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