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It’s been a while since I felt that tingle in my nose.
The one that tells you tears are about to fall.
But I hid under your snowflake bedspread watching clouds fall instead.
Only because I wasn’t ready for you to see me.




You snuggled with me nose to nose.
And I never felt a hug go right through me until that day.
Where I swear you touched more than the skin that stretched over my bones.
Your fingers gripping ever inch of my soul.



And I loved it.




I left feeling choppy and unfinished.
Like the book I so often try to write in.
Like the water on my dresser that’s always left with more than a few drops.
It’s where my life’s been lately. Unfinished.




The only part that seems complete is you.





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On Friday March 7th, 2008, Bridge (353) writes:
this is..wow. it's beautiful. i love your words


On Tuesday April 17th, 2007, heartdripsblack (759) writes:
geeshe this was absolutely amazeing. and wonderful. ~ saddened.


On Monday April 16th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:
That... That loneliness felt in thunderstorms in an empty house. Cold. Only blanketed by memories. Thanks for sharing.


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, dying angel (1340) writes:
the way you opened this and closed it...it seems a bit unfinished..which i absolutely adore..because that means there's more. and with your writing..i always want more. i'm sure you know this by now.


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, dying angel (1340) writes:
"But I hid under your snowflake bedspread watching clouds fall instead. Only because I wasn’t ready for you to see me."....your beauty shines so radiantly..i'm sure he's blinded by your stunningness more and more every second.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, raskal (199) writes:
'And i never felt a hug go right through me until that day, where i swear you touched more than the skin that stretched over my bones' -i know that feeling exactly, you expressed it perfectly -beautiful.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, Freebird (653) writes:
Such a beautiful write. Magnificent. Good to see you posting again.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
another surprising poster, they suddenly all creep out the woodwork...this was very isolated a feeling; slow dripping raindrops in a glass, things ever slow and never changing...a poignant shuddering slice of loneliness


On Friday April 13th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
"The only part that seems complete is you." Wandering in a haze, never knowing the difference between reality and fantasy until you're skin-to-skin with that soul who is more you than you ever feel you are...gorgeous, lovely. Gorgeous. ~*Beth*~


On Thursday April 12th, 2007, blue (1749) writes:
=) KirKir! "like the book I so often try to write in" sounds like mine.. =) i chyu ~b


On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Loketha Angel (158) writes:
This was so beautiful. Every droplet of a letter that formed intoa word was magnifiscent. I loved every enveloping picture.



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