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"River Creases. Stoned Distaste." by K_Love

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I had hope those days.
Where the river creases at the stones
And the buried pop bottles float to safety.
But it wasn’t the same after that.


The cigarette burned out a decade.
And coffee just didn’t taste the same.
It was too cold to try to move my legs.
And you were just too stubborn to try any longer.


I never wanted to say I gave up.
Because I hadn’t. Yet.
Although I felt stepped on.
I wanted to believe there was something more than goodbye.


You just never gave me that chance.





(Unfinished. or a piece of shit.)





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On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:
"I wanted to believe there was something more than goodbye."....i've felt this before. then i learned that saying goodbye...is the only way to find out if there's something more. it's hard when you want to hold on


On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:
when you want to find another way to make things work, but the other person refuses to look past 'goodbye'. i know it's cliche, but you really do need to let that person go because if it's meant to be it will happen.


On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, K_Love (691) writes:
:) Thanks lovely, this wasn't personal though. Just a write.


On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:
oops sorry. i read way too much into things sometimes. lol silly me.


On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, blue (1749) writes:
'The cigarette burned out a decade" KirKir =) finish it lady. ~b


On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:
I love coffee and I love this work...the last line ties it up nicely



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