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It snows deep in this pit.
Cold and alone.
Trapped inside a snow globe of guilt.
A glass case of mirrors.

Glittered raindrops fell in our eyes
Spoiled our taste buds.
Nothing was ever good unless perfected.
Flawed to ourselves, blemished to each other.

Cut myself on the case of glass.
Sharpened, deadly.
I knew it was too much to look myself in the eye.
The eye of a liar. Liar.
Broken image lined with glitter. Glam. Raindrops.

And yet it snows.
Will you shake me when it stops?
I’d like to see the snow.
Rather than the rain.

Stapled the wounds of the rough edges.
Flawed but still working.
Down but still moving.
Glittered, spoiled, broken…
Still. We dance. We sing.
But yet. Yet.
We are [nothing] raindrops

Pitter patter in the snow.
Slush.
Mud.
A combination of shit.
Rested on the cement filled with cracks of bullshit.
Lies, hate, sorrow. Imperfections.

We dance no more. There is no song.
We sing no more. There is no beat.
Our errors blotted out.
Glitter soaked eyes.
Shake me when it stops.
Wake me from this flawed life.

No longer I want to be...






[Trapped] inside a snow globe of guilt.




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On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
dear god. i love the way you clutter all your thoughts together into a beautiful poem.


On Friday April 21st, 2006, ZealousValadiction (66) writes:
This write is stunning , I love the emoition in it ..... hmmm I wonder which poem I am taking of my fav's so I can put this up :) I realy like this one


On Saturday March 11th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (276) writes:
why the snow rather than rain? the end is amazing. ~lauren~


On Friday February 17th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1147) writes:
your imagery sparkles so gently. this piece is so glowing within beautific sparks.


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
you have the BEST most amazing way of saying everything that you think. and i am completely in love with you doll.


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
"Broken image lined with glitter. Glam. Raindrops"..it seems as though you are writing of what i was feeling a few months back. the cheap glamour of drugs. and of repetition. the same thing every night.. but thats just how it relates to me.


On Monday December 26th, 2005, Crimson Shade (115) writes:
Amazing - "trapped inside a snow globe of guilt" - opening stanza was amazing, it coerced me to read... amazing... you keep writing and i'll keep reading.


On Monday December 26th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
you never cease to stop my heart, YOU are beauty, always.


On Sunday December 25th, 2005, An Expired Member (39) writes:
Glitter soaked eyes. is a beautyful line i love it



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