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"I Fight Alone" by K_Love

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Time seems
to be lost
in the
crevices
of our
imagination
and in the
rips and tears
of our
hearts


Moving forward
to pretend
it doesn't
hurt us,
when in reality
our mouths
become dryer
and our eyes become
heavier
with every
step


The paper
with the line
that our blue
or black ink
pens touch
bleed out
our soul
only onto
a thin piece
of
paper


Thinking to ourselves
we say,
Yes I would rather
bleed out the thoughts
in my crevices
and the tears in my
heart...


But yet no one
is by my side,
like a warrior
by themselves
standing against
an army...



I fight alone...



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On Tuesday November 7th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:
i really like the structure a lot. easy feeling to relate to, and you said it so well.


On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, PointlessX (48) writes:
i wish i could quote a stanza like i ususally do....but every word in this poem hits me like a year of depression and there is nothing to make it any better except understanding and apprectiation of beautifull meaningful words....


On Thursday July 14th, 2005, blue (1780) writes:
Splendid words here Kir! My compliments to you love. ~b


On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:
This is amazing and powerful in a soft way. Excellent


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:
awsomely awsome in its supream awsome...nes


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:
I love this, greatly written.


On Thursday December 16th, 2004, VenomPlease (185) writes:
Amazing piece. You are an incredible writer. I really like your style


On Monday October 4th, 2004, NikesRain (1512) writes:
wonderfully done and expressed. It tore at me, knowing the truth in the words, feeling every stanza. outstanding


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, Zhee (642) writes:
i loved the way this was written.. expressed to perfection...


On Tuesday September 28th, 2004, ElegantKiss (402) writes:
"bleed out the thoughts".. lovely!


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (183) writes:
Loved It... Simply Loved It. Thanks GPhD.


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, girlafraid (581) writes:
the concept is conveyed brilliantly, along with the emotion...very strong piece...


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Butterfly (123) writes:
Wow I really like this. Love the visuals.



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