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you were my everything..
and just like that
you're gone?

i bet she put you up to it
if you want to lose me this way, it's your choice
but when she breaks you i won't be here to pick up the pieces

just keep that in mind.

and when i leave i'll take a tiny little part of you with me.
and i hope you feel empty without it.
i hope it burns.

i'll pull the plug of your breathing machine
and leave you to your forgetting.

goodbye.





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On Thursday December 30th, 2004, urbanhumility (1348) writes:
firce concept........deep.......i like.........urban


On Thursday December 9th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
amazing.


On Thursday December 9th, 2004, FindAgentX (20) writes:
thanks guys, this poem is really important to me. breathing machine came from a line my friend wrote "you have been my breathing machine, i have been half-angry at you for keeping me alive. but i am pulling the plug now, goodbye."-cayleb


On Thursday December 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (45) writes:
well this hit home in a way i never thought it could again...nice write!


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, VenomPlease (181) writes:
Yes I agree. Breathing machine.... it's an interesting concept. Nice write


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
"and leave you to your forgetting".. . well, I really liked this. it was simple. . but oh so strong, captivated and burned me. . breathing machine. . hmm, I'm getting something strange out of this. . too many thoughts at once. great work :)



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