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prone to absently writing your name in random places

i feel the winter beginning to eat at my edges like some disease
            (the cold reminds me of you.)
and i'm reduced to minute tears, my forehead on the steering wheel...pulled over in the spot- the last place i saw you
       .....walking away
and i know how you must have felt

and knowing that threatens to change minutes into hours

i can't express how sorry i am- i can't erase this pain
                     i can't let go

a part of me will always be a part of you

these pictures in my mind- your gorgeous eyes
(ringed with black eyeliner)
if you promised you wouldn't leave i would promise you
                        forever
                     in a heartbeat

(for tcn)



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On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
aww, damn. . . this is beautiful. unique and pressing. sweet and regretful. really liked the second stanza , the simple speech of it. . . mixed with the emotion, makes this wonderful


On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, frozen (748) writes:
i must say this is simply a wonderful poem very good write


On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
wow..this has a personal beauty to it. but not too personal as to be not evident enough to be felt. brilliantly executed...im impressed yet again.



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