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if love is like falling
falling out of love is like dying.

it seems everytime i turn around these days,
there's a knife in my back.
 
i love you both but i swear
i could kill you both right now.

i think i lost two best friends yesterday,
i lost them to lust and infatuation
two of my most hated hated words in the english dictionary.

she had the nerve to ask me if it was okay,
if it would be okay..
to take him away
completely.

and i said it was fine
(through my inner tears)
i'm too nice sometimes,
way too nice sometimes.

i want them both to be very happy.
but not with each other...
some part of me is still wanting him
maybe it's just habit.

he told me he felt lost without me.
well, he sure found himself quick.

i swear, if you pull a stunt like this
you're going to lose me forever.
















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On Saturday December 25th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
I know how this goes. I think some people are meant to be happy and some people are meant to let it happen. Hrm. Nicely done. ~Ship!


On Thursday November 18th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
this hurts.. I know the feeling all too well. If it helps any, keep your niceness, it will prevail in the end.. though you will continue to go through a ton of shit before you get there. thank you for sharing :::OLd


On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, FindAgentX (20) writes:
it really means a lot to me that you guys commented on this. it was very difficult to write and when it was finally finished i thought it was horrible. thanks for the encouragement guys. :)


On Sunday July 4th, 2004, capt_funguy (998) writes:
way too nice sometimes , to your own detriment .. got the buzz you get when your house falls down from this .... helpless witness .... sad sweet write ... funguy


On Sunday July 4th, 2004, Evil (542) writes:
this made me want to cry, actually. that was a burst of creativy. and you found it quite well. im liking it. i think it was beautiful...full of sorrow...almost bitter with jealously. wonderful work, my love.



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