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i've fallen too deep (to pull myself out) now

i've written too hard (to erase this) now

your eyes look into me (deep, two pools of sight) i sink in (undimmed by pain behind)

 

 

every word gives me feelings (reserved only for very touching moments)

i let go on the inside (and hold it in on the outside)

i wish you could save me from me.

 

every action is(n't) considered (with masochistic intention)

every move that i make (will break me within)

 

the only words in my song aren't meant for me

and it chips my heart every time (because i know it can't be)



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On Monday January 31st, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:
very uniquely done and captivating. i loved this very much.


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
i dont think i know another poet that expresses things in a way that can crush every last bone in my body. heartbreaking addiction. i cant stop reading though its tearing me apart.


On Thursday May 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:
Loverly, like lots of chocolate for me to eat..


On Friday April 30th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
you have a new fan ... sulky will catch a little flack for not steering me your way ... beautiful work ... glad i caught it ...funguy


On Monday April 26th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
i like this as well - very cool.. i don't see anything contrived though "save me from me" reminded me of evanescence's lyrics -save me from the nothing i've become- an overused expression nowadays


On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
i also remembered where i heard something like this .. rescue me from me ! in smashing pumpkin's song galapogos.. sorry i just had to say it. it doesn't matter though the poem's lovely


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Evil (543) writes:
nicely done. *claps violently*


On Monday April 26th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
clap violently? rotf


On Monday April 12th, 2004, steuss (145) writes:
I really enjoy your style, the use fo the ( ) 's are wonderful, like the poem is the text outside, and that what you really mean is the combination, that people usually only see the words outside the parenthises. WELL done!



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