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Red.butterflies (with Emi)

Red butterflies splattered upon the wall
cold steel kissing pale skin

last words escape from plush lips
to resonate throughout the room

cheek pressed against the tile
alone and cold

images dance before her eyes

memories of a girl

eyes of a dead woman
surrounded by the face of a pale angel

broken wings with broken lives

without hope you have no fear
striving for oblivion

she didn't know she would have such precision

in breaking her own heart

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On Monday February 7th, 2005, Lynaes (1148) writes:

Damn.. I'm in shock. I can only echo Clam.. Exquisite descriptions, metaphors.. you've just done such a perfect job with this.. beauty at it's most bittersweet.

On Friday January 21st, 2005, AniDayz (1297) writes:

oh holy shit...ahhhh...im all shocked and choked up..at a loss for words..this just hit me so hard...ahhh...ditto to that *faves*

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:

"Red butterflies splattered upon the wall cold steel kissing pale skin". . the pictures I am getting from this are incredibly real. . the ending. WHOA, great job on that. "she didnt know she would have such precision in breaking her own heart". . *faves

On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

this ripped my heart out and showed it to me. the pain, the internal wrath. quietly killing the deafening silence. picture perfect.

On Monday April 26th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

a touch of despair in this one.. chill yet beautiful imagery.. i'm getting hooked to your style

On Friday April 30th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

a touch? ..lol ... sounds like the broken heart was only part of the tragedy here ... right from the first line .. ( a classic) ... i was into this ... funguy

On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

did i say touch? lol i knew it, you just had to pinpoint the awkwardness, didn't you :p

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