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why can't i concentrate?
.l.i.e.s.
whatever happened to that little girl?

asleep on the tiles

were they red or white first?

doesn't matter. she's gone like the faded melody./

wish you could've been there, instead of him..

holding her hand.. singing her to sleep.

 

instead of him beating her head against the tiles

her hands fluttered like birds

and he thought he was doing her a favor..

 

her hands and feet against the tile

flopping like fish

..drowning in air.





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On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1058) writes:
Wow, just wow!! Each line held it's own pain, it's own hurt. Amamzing. Julia~


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
"her hands fluttered like birds". . . damn, this hurt. ripped my heart out. . completely and scratched at it with jagged nails. AMAZING work on this one, i'm completely feeling this. . pain. .


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Twilight (2103) writes:
"..drowning in air. " that line is fucking incredible. your making abusive love to my heart, and im loving every scond of it. tragically alluring.


On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:
very loose style, though effective. hard to discern the meaning, but several ideas come to mind, each more potent then the last.


On Monday April 26th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
thoughts and images


On Monday April 26th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
i'm glad red wolf commented because i agree, but i like it bc it's like a vague memory.. recollection of fleeting lost thoughts, or search for something that leads and links to another and another.. and in effect it creates a myriad of subtle/provoking th


On Sunday March 14th, 2004, Exodus (211) writes:
very interesting....i like this...



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